Need Feedback and Advice for Video: DIY In Less Than A Minute Toy - Straw Spinner

[paawanc]

Hello Everyone,
I am Paawan and this is my first post here! I have been coming on this forum from a long time for reading jokes and finding other funny things whenever I get bored, so thought of joining in and contributing a few jokes,etc. But first I want some advice!:-)

My family bought a new video camera this New Year and I have a dream of creating some great content from it! With the help of a friend who held the camera, I created a video about a simple toy I had learnt to make a few years ago in school, I have uploaded the video on YouTube:-


I wanted some real feedback(even if it is harsh)! But friends please consider the fact that this is the first time I have created a video and it took me 2-3 days of hard work to put this all together so there are many things which I'll try to improve in my future videos!:-)

Also suggest anything under the sun of which I could create a video and post!:-P

MODS: I didn't post it in the Videos section purposely because this isn't a random video which I wanted to share but my own creation which I wanted more forum members to see and give their feedback on how is it!

P.S. Please do hit like if you liked my video, I'll try to work even more harder next time and create more interesting toys!!!:-)

[ignoramusenator]

hmmm pretty cool for a first video.

[♥»вlυεвεггγ«♥]

i liked it, it's cool

[paawanc]

hmmm pretty cool for a first video.

i liked it, it's cool

Thanks a Lot!!!:-)
You have no idea how much you have boosted my morale!!! Now I'll definitely and much more happily try to shoot more!!!:-)
And please do like the video as that will increase it's ranking on YouTube!:-)

[Lisbonstar28]

Good one... have left you a message on yt as well.

[invincible07]

good effort buddy

[paawanc]

Good one... have left you a message on yt as well.

good effort buddy

Thanks!!!:-) Thanks a LOT for your support!!!:-)

[Guddu_Vikas]

hmm voted in the poll

[adirocksit]

pretty good trick !!......"Liked" it !!

What I would suggest you for video creation is that you should use "POV" or "FPS" mode instead of direct in front of the camera.....specially in those kind of videos where you are explaining a process. Its much easier to understand it in that mode.

[funky_sam]

good effort buddy

[imadumbgirl]

good effort buddy

[paawanc]

good effort buddy

Thanks urasmartgirl!!!;-)

hmm voted in the poll

Thanks Guddu_Vikas!!!:-)

good effort buddy

Thanks funky_sam!:-):-)

pretty good trick !!......"Liked" it !!

What I would suggest you for video creation is that you should use "POV" or "FPS" mode instead of direct in front of the camera.....specially in those kind of videos where you are explaining a process. Its much easier to understand it in that mode.

Thanks a lot buddy! I actually had the intention to shoot it that way but the camcorder we recently bought is a 3D camcorder and it needs a minimum distance of a few feet and so we shot this from a distance but in the end it turned out that even a few scenes in this video were not view-able in 3D and so I uploaded only 2D footage! From now onward I'll try to shoot the video in such a manner that when I view it in the end, I'll think of myself as a complete newbie and if I can understand everything!:-)